Your production is very poor. Start with speaking into the camera and letting people see you. Even if you are a 14-year-old kid, you will get more views. In fact, if you are young, you are more likely to get more views.
You need to script what you are saying first. Organize your thoughts. Speak naturally.
You might get a cult following due to how bad the production is. Most people will shut it off as soon as the really bad music is played. Some might be intrigued by the really bad music.
I'm not doing this to hurt you. I'm doing this to because you came to the forum and asked for opinions.